MARY RICHARDS THE ORIGIN STARRING: Reed Richards As Mr. Fantastic Susan Richards As The Invisible Woman Johnny Storm As The Human Torch And Benjamin J. Grimm As The ever-loving blue eyed Thing PART ONE: Falling Towards Apotheosis THE BAXTER BUILDING "Goo boo," said the adorable little blond moppet. "Ah, isn't that just heartbreakingly cute?" asked Sue Richards. "Yes, dear," replied her husband. Reed was currently deeply engrossed in a fourth dimensional model of the expanding multiverse from Big Bang on. "That's nice." "Oh, look, she's smiling! Look at her smile!" Sue grinned at her baby, tickling her. The baby, Mary, smiled. "Great smile, dear," Reed said, absently, his thoughts elsewhere. Now, if the law of Energy/Matter conservation holds true in a infinite dimensional setting, then . . . what? I really wish that I could get an appointment with Eternity. Maybe Dr. Strange . . . "Are you even paying attention, Reed?" she asked, vexed. "But of course, dear." Now then . . . the hypothesize would be that the so-called crunch of the universe would be happening a lot quicker with the infinite creation of a universe with each decision that every person on Earth, not to count those of the uncounted alien worlds in addition to the infinite number of sub-atomic particles . . . So, that can't be right. Or can it? "What did I just say, Reed?" she challenged. "Uh," Reed dithered. He said, very sub-vocally, "Personal Recorder: replay last minute of conversation." He listened very briefly, all the while umm-ing and err-ing. "Of course, dear. You said, and I quote, 'Oh, look, she's smiling. Look at her smile. Isn't that just plain adorable? I just want to eat you up, yes I do.' Then it degenerated into meaningless baby talk." "Oh, sometimes you infuriate me, Mr. Richards!" She stalked out of the gigantic lab, carrying her baby with her. "What?" Reed asked, looking after her in confusion. "You just don't get it do you, Big-Brain?" came the gravely voice of Ben from another entrance. "Don't get what?" "She knew you listened to that recorder you carry with you." "Oh. Darn." "Yeah, yeah. You can make it up to her with a big-big dinner at some fancy restaurant, you know?" Ben handed Reed a can of beer, and gulped down his own can. "Here, drink this down." "No thanks. And you're right. Big dinner . . . fancy restaurant . . . flowers . . . babysitter," Reed mumbled, ticking off his fingers with each item. "Romance, not one of my strong points." "Well, that's why you've got me, Stretch-o." "Sometimes he makes me so mad. Doesn't he make you mad, Mary?" "Goo boo." Mary wriggled in her mother's arms, and smiled some more. "Oh, that's my little girl," she cooed. "Ah, Sue, sweetheart?" Reed said quietly as he leaned into the nursery. "I'm still angry," she glared at him. "Ah, I . . . umm . . . was wrong to ignore you like that. It's just that-" "Stop. Cease and desist. Just repeat the first part," she said, holding up her hand to her husband's face, and looking quite stern. "What? I was wrong?" he said, puzzled. "Again." Reed sighed quite deeply, but then he smiled quite widely and wrapped his arms around his wife and daughter and said into Sue's ear quite softly, tickling her, "I was wrong, dear. Let me take you out to the Russian Tearoom and then to some ballroom dancing." "Well . . . alright. But what about a sitter for Mary?" she asked, looking at Mary, who smiled once again. "I'm sure that we can find someone," he said reassuringly. "You think?" "I know. After all, if you can't trust the smartest man in the world, who can you trust?" "Well, there's always Dr. Doom." "Uh-huh. You know I could go to the Tearoom with Namora. Ouch." "Less than you deserve for that little statement," Sue mock-growled, referring to the punch she gave Reed. She then looked down, and sighed. "Reed, you've wrapped us with your arms . . . again." "Oh. Sorry." "So, who do you want to baby-sit Mary?" "How about Jennifer Walters?" "Hmm . . . think she's available? I thought that she was in space with the other Avengers." "No, she's in New York trying to track down her cousin." "That's . . . nice." Mental Note: Check structural integrity of building. "So, how do you think of the She-Hulk as your babysitter, Mary?" Sue asked her baby. "Goo boo." "Aren't you the cutest thing," Jennifer gushed, looking down at the baby in the bassinet. "Well, Jennifer, I hope that this isn't too much of an imposition," Sue asked anxiously. "Oh, it's not a problem, Sue. Really," she replied. "And if any super-villain were to attack, well I'll just send them over to the restaurant, double-quick!" "Don't you dare," Sue replied, mock-threateningly. "I want this to go off without a hitch. And that means no bad guys to fight no wars to stop no massive warps in reality to fix. This is one evening that will not end up like a bad rerun of the Twilight Zone." "More power to you. I can't remember the last time I went on a date that didn't turn into a slug-fest." Reed stepped into the babies room, and said, "Sue, darling, we really should be leaving now. Our reservation is for eight, and it's already ten minutes till." "Oh, stop worrying, Reed. If we're that late, we'll just take the jet." "You know that the mayor doesn't like us to fly the plane that low," Reed replied. "I was joking," Sue replied, looking stern yet smiling. "Oh." THE RUSSIAN TEAROOM "So then he said that since we first 'encountered' him, we should handle him from now on," finished Reed. "Ooooh, no, no way in hell," said Sue. "I absolutely refuse to deal with -what does he call himself again? - Kang the Conqueror, even if a hundred Captain Americas begged us to. If he wants to get tromped by the Avengers every other week, that's his call." "Yes, well, no offense to Dr. Pym, what they need there is not an engineer but a scientist." "Why, Dr Richards," Sue said in mock shock. "Who knew that you were just as much an egotist as Dr. Doom?" "Bow before me, peasant, for I am Victor Von Doom, absolute ruler of cheese! Yea, though I walk through the valley of corny dialogue, I shall forevermore haunt my asinine enemies with even more idiotic robots!" went Reed in a very overblown Doom imitation. "To me, my HERBIE!" "S-s-stop it!" Sue said, trying hard to be coherent in between her laughs. "You're so corny!" "It's been a while since I've seen you laugh, Sue, darling," Reed said. He paused, then after a little rambling down memory lane, said, "You know, I think that the very first time I saw you laugh, that was when I knew that I would marry you." "The first time you saw me laugh was when I was twelve; you were in college, and I was laughing at you," Sue said. "So if that romantic twaddle is true, you, sir, should seek professional help." "Just call me the original dirty old man!" "Ha!" "If you don't appreciate my humor, I'm sure that Namora would." "Ha!" They stopped talking, and just enjoyed each others company the glow of their love warming them. Of course, that was just the time that their beepers went off. "Intruder alert, multiple interlopers detected within headquarters," said the tinny voice of Reed's personal computer within his ear. "Come, Susan, there is are intruders within the Baxter Building," Reed said, as he got out of his seat and, with great strides from his elongated legs, quickly went out the door. "Ah, shit," muttered Sue. She quickly settled the check, and was out the door. She caught up with her husband, and said, "Where's the signal flare? You know that it could have been the Silver Surfer popping in again, with some of his friends." "Just in case, Sue." Reed called for the Fantasti-Car, which followed them wherever they went, and waited. Soon enough, they saw a fiery numeral four light up the New York skyline. "Well, that cinches it." "I really hope that Jennifer is all right," said Sue, unable to voice her fear for her daughter. "I'm a bit more worried about the building." NEW YORK SKYLINE "And then I found out that she was a Skrull!" said Johnny incredulously. "That's some dream, matchsticks," Spider-man commented. "Though with your B-movie ossified brain, I'm not surprised that you dreamt that you married an alien." Not to mention your intense fear of commitment, he thought. "Oh, laugh all you want, web-head," grumbled the Torch. "But that wasn't all. My niece had turned into a teenager, wore this really stupid armor, and was calling herself Miss Psi-gon. And Sue acted really angry and . . . out of character, I suppose. Oh, and she wore this really skimpy bikini thing . . ." "What ho! Dost mine ears hear the not-so-faint stirrings of incestuous lust?" "Don't be sick." Johnny then sent a small stream of fire in Spidey's direction. "Still, maybe it's time that you got yourself another girlfriend." "Don't I wish. Ever since I dropped out of ESU, my dating pool has been limited to the super-heroine crowd. And while a lot of them are hot, none of them really float my boat, you know?" "You could always go out with a super-villainess." "Oh, right! Like I would go out with one of them!" "Don't knock it till you've tried it." "Oh, get out of here. Dating a villainess never works out; you know that. Look at what happened to Daredevil." "Ah, that's a fluke. Besides, you could bring them over to the Light Side of the Force with your devastatingly good looks and incredibly huge ego!" "Well with my incredibly huge something!" "Ha! Say . . ." "What?" "Ever get the feeling you're in a Hemingway novel?" Before a discussion on the relative nature of reality and fiction, Torch noticed the FF signal flare light up the New York night sky. The Torch turned to Spider-man and said, "Listen, I've got to go. It's probably Galactus come to chew on Australia again." "Alright. Have fun with the cosmic stuff while those of us who don't have a space ship try to handle the simpler things like muggers and thieves and the Punisher . . ." With that, Spider-man swung away from the Human Torch. THE HELLICARRIER The pot was high, the gamblers were rock steady, and the smoke from the various cigars filled the air with a pungent, musty aroma. "Well, gents, time to put up or shut up," purred Loren. "Straight flush." The grumbles that came from the other players made her day; ah, the sounds of defeat, the soft plastic chink of the chips as she gathered them in. Wonderful, it was. "I'm still uncertain as to why this game of 'Poker' would change my belief that humanity is basically without merit," asked the Silver Surfer. "It's the human experience in a microcosm, my friend," said Dr. Strange. His apprentice, a rather angsty young fellow, just grunted in the background. "All right, maybe that was a bit of an exaggeration. But you can learn quite a bit about people as you play a game of cards." "Like the fact that Fury folds faster than my sweet aunt Petunia," shot out Ben. He immediately got hit upon the head with a cigar. "It is talk like that that'll get you thrown out of the Hellicarrier," said the head of SHIELD, as he lit another cigar. "So anyone want to talk shop?" "I thought that you spy types knew all about us," commented Ben. "Well, sure, eventually. But it takes a long time to get the quiet, non-flashy stuff." "Well, recently, I, along with the Silver Surfer, and the rest of the Defenders, stopped a plot by Mephisto to steal the souls of Americans by using television to rot their minds," said Dr. Strange. "How could he steal peoples' souls by rotting their brains?" asked Loren. "Mind control," said the angsty young man in the back. He then raised his arms, spread his fingers, and went, "Wooooooo." "Cute, kid. Now why don't you go back to sulking." "Anything on the mutant front?" asked Fury of Loren. "Not much. Polaris has been pretty quiet; the Sentinels seemed to have stopped breeding like rats. We beat a bunch of rich fops called the Hellfire Club. And we saved the universe." "Yeah, yeah, you bunch always save the universe." Hmm, mused Fury, some of the richest people in America has set themselves up as a team of villains? Freaking typical. "Wait a minute, the Hellfire Club? I really don't see why the Hellfire Club would be interested in mutants," said Dr. Strange. "It's 'cause they're mutants, too," said Loren. Dr. Strange did not respond beyond a slight widening of his eyes. He then withdrew within himself and started muttering. Hand after hand went on, with Loren winning the most, and the Thing and Dr. Strange tied. Nick Fury was soon going through his cigars like a fan-boy through comics, grunting in pain with each hand. His torture went on for a while, until the phone on the bar started ringing. With a not-too-sincere apologetic grin, he picked it up and said, "What?" He listened for a few seconds and hung up. He went back to the table, where most of the other players were pretending that they didn't know what his cards were, and said to Ben, "Trouble at the Baxter Building. The signal flare was sighted." Ben grunted, and got up. "Thanks, Nick," he said. He said to the others, "Well, guess I've got to save the world again. See you next week at my place, alright?" "Sure," said Loren. "But only if it hasn't been blown up. I hate playing in rubble." "You know where the hangar is," said Fury. "Yeah." Ben started jogging out of the room, his footsteps causing the floor to vibrate horribly. He said with some regret, "I had a great hand, too." THE BAXTER BUILDING When they arrived at the Baxter Building, almost simultaneously, they discovered that the floors were an absolute mess, though not in rubbles. The furniture was destroyed, and the walls showed blast signs and impact craters. And nearly everywhere were the sparking remains of decimated attack-robots. "Ah, jeeze-freakin'-weeze," muttered the Thing as he surveyed the damage. "Jennifer!" yelled Sue, as she started looking around the floor. "Jennifer!" "Over here!" yelled Johnny, finding her beneath a still mostly intact attack-robot. The Thing lifted it off her, picked her up, and placed her on a now upright couch. "Oog," she moaned. "Did anyone catch the personality of that Hulk?" "Jennifer!" yelled Sue, as she took her friend by the shoulders and shook her. "Where's Mary?" "Please, Susan. She may have a concussion," said Reed, as he tried to stop her. "Sue?" whispered She-Hulk, squinting slightly. "I'm sorry . . . those robots surprised me; like they just appeared out of thin-air, and blitzkrieg me." She paused, and swallowed. "They . . . took Mary." "No. Oh no," said Sue, her face turning ashen with fear, as did the others'. "Who?" At her words, an attack-robot reactivated, though much of it was missing. It sparked and screeched, its speech systems coming back online. And it said, "Standby for message. Standby for message." Its optics glowed for a brief instance, and suddenly a life-size hologram of Dr. Doom appeared in the room. Even though it was obviously a recording, it still gave the impression that it was staring at them. The hologram began to speak. "Hello, Richards. I have captured your daughter, as you have discovered by now. I shall keep her quite safe, as safe as if she were my own. However, if you interfere in my plans . . . well, on your own foolish head does the consequence lie, Richards. Farewell." And with a slight, arrogant chuckle, the hologram disappeared. The robot head immediately exploded in a burst of shrapnel. Reed snapped his hand back, and glared at what little remained. "Why that dirty," Ben said, trailing off. He looked at Sue, who had fallen to the ground. "Wow," muttered Jennifer, "that looks like fun." And she too became unconscious. CASTLE DOOM Doom stared at the baby; the baby stared back at him. He was rather nonplussed that the tiny little thing was not at all disturbed at having been taken from its home to a, admittedly, gloomy place such as Castle Doom. Suddenly he cracked a smile, though it was unseen behind his impassive metal mask. It was to laugh, for the great Dr. Doom, the most feared man in the world to be so off-put by a child, even a child such as this. "Hello," Doom said to Mary. "I don't know if you can understand me, but I need someone different to . . . exposit to, if only for a little while. Automation, follow with the child." Dutifully the artificial humanoid, which was cradling Mary, followed in Doom's footsteps. "If your father remains true to form for this heroic game that he insists on playing he shall try to defeat my nefarious plot. "I wonder how that would make you feel if you were truly sentient, little girl?" Doom asked rhetorically. "Would you understand his motivations? Would you feel resentment? No matter, this is a moot point." Soon enough, Doom reached his destination. Large doors opened, and technicians in bulky body armor took Mary and placed her into the womb of most intricate machine, one that took up the entire huge chamber. The technicians scurried about busily, making certain that all was ready. "You see, my dear, the point of this was not to take over the so-called American Government but you," Doom said with a great deal of satisfaction. "Though you probably do not appreciate this, seeing as how you have all the mental acuity of, say, your father, you would realize that this was a bit of, dare I say it, sheer bloody genius. "I had become aware, over the years and through various means, of portents that state the coming of one who shall be likened unto a god. Naturally at first I assumed that it was myself, however I soon came to realized who it would actually be. And finally, with one final confirmation, I knew that it would be you. Isn't that right, Nathaniel?" Doom asked, and a holographic window appeared in mid-air, showing a scene of horror. Hooked to various devices whose only purpose could only be torture, there hung a rather wiry and elderly fellow, an eye missing and the socket bloody. A kind of grim determination was the only thing keeping him awake, as he glared at Doom. "Have you nothing to say to the grand-daughter you have betrayed, old chap?" "You can join your whore of a mother, you filthy bastard," spat out Nathaniel Richards with the last of his strength. He then slumped unconscious when a surge of electricity fired all his nerve endings. Doom seethed in silence then finally killed a random technician. "Well," he said, urbane once more, "that certainly put a pall to my apotheosis. Oh well. Now then, young Mary, when I realized that it was not I who was in for God-Hood and that it was, in fact, the daughter of my nemesis (slight laughter), I became quite depressed. However I had yet another revelation. Fate is a blind mistress. The who doesn't matter so much that the role be filled, that destiny not be denied. And so, young Mary, I'm afraid that I shall have to steal your power and thus your role in this grand game that is life. Doctor! Begin the procedure." And begin they did. Energies of unknown properties crackled through the air. An entire group of psions forced their concentration through machines directed at the womb. Various mages began chanting a spell of channeling. A clear dome closed over Mary, and the energy collectors based upon the one used for the Silver Surfer activated. "It's working," muttered Doom, as he focused upon not on his normal sense or even upon his armor's sensors but rather his own quite sensitive mystical senses. "My god, I feel it . . . feel her." And suddenly the psychics cried in pain as their brains were destroyed, sizzled by the brief contact with the vast consciousness that they had helped to bring about, the vast machinery began to spark and finally explode, unable to compensate for the power it was absorbing. The mages burst into flames, their screams brief, and their death swift. Klaxons rang everywhere, as all the technicians ran out of the room, as the sprinklers overhead turned on. "No," muttered Doom as he stared at Mary, who had started to glow. "Ultimate power . . . it's right here. I shall not let it escape my grasp. I shall not!" Armored arms crashed through the clear dome that covered the womb, unmindful of the vast energies trapped within that escaped. Doom activated within his armor systems the energy absorbers that he had installed. He stared at Mary with both pain and exultation. "Ha! I . . . I see so much, I feel so much! Gods, what power!" Mary, who had been mostly quiet through this entire ordeal, cried when Doom's hands clutched at her, her nimbus growing brighter and brighter until it obscured all sight. Doom cried out, as his eyes were burned, as the power suddenly turned deadly. "No," whispered Doom as he felt something invade his mind. "No, I shall not let you in. No, no, no, no, no, no, no!" A cry escaped from Doom's lips, as something brushed against his mind, against his very soul, and he collapsed. Automatic systems imbedded in the very masonry of the castle activated when its sensors detected Doom's state. A powerful teleportational matrix, one designed primarily to teleport singularity cores the size of the moon, appeared and shunted the vast machinery to the one place that Doom considered appropriate for his trash. THE BAXTER BUILDING "I feel the need for violence," Sue said as she loaded yet another hand-cannon. It soon joined the others that were on her back. "A great deal of mindless rage needs must be expressed." "Ah, yeah, sure, Suzie-Q. Now why don't you give me those until we actually get to Latveria," Ben said, as he went for the arsenal. Sue glared at him so fiercely that he backed off. "Right. Your guns." "We should have gone to Latveria in the first place," Johnny said, as he had done all throughout the day, "instead of stopping those Life-Model-Decoy things." "If we hadn't, Johnny," Reed said, as calm as ever, "they would have surely undermined the government beyond repair." He paused. "At least, that's what I'm telling myself." "Uh huh," Johnny said. "Could you hurry up with that transport platform?" "I'm trying to find the correct frequency to transport through the shielding around Latveria," Reed said, as he looked from the real-time S.H.I.E.L.D. satellite feed to the transport platform. "There, it's done." "Finally," Sue growled out, as she sprang up from the couch. She went over to the other side of the laboratory and tried to lift the Vibranium-reinforced solid-sound blaster. However, after many attempts, she finally placed it within a bubble that floated behind her. "Don'cha think that's a bit of overkill?" Ben asked. She answered with a look, and he backed away once again. "Guess not." "Well, come on, everyone," Reed said, "get on the platform." "Right-ho," Jennifer said, as she also got up from the couch weakly. "Jennifer," Sue said quite gently, a change from her recent attitude, "you're much too weak to come along. Thank you, though. Besides with all my guns, I'm certain that I'll make more than enough collateral damage for the both of us." " . . . all right," Jennifer said, agreeing for she did not wish to be a liability, especially in this mission. "God speed, Sue." "Ok, I'm scanning your patterns," Reed said. Out of habit, he checked once more with the real-time read-out, to make certain that Doom had not strengthened his shielding. That saved their lives. "Holy god." The display of Castle Doom was one of utter carnage. Nearly half of the castle was seemingly gone, with fires raging across the roof. "What is --oh great googily moogily," Ben said, as he too stared at the ruins of Castle Doom. "I . . . I'm sure that Mary's all right," he said quickly, laying a rocky hand upon Reed's shoulder. He did not reply, too transfixed by the horrible image. The others stepped off the platform and when they saw the feed, they too were stunned. Sue held onto Johnny for support. Jennifer too went over to her friend and made comforting noises to her, while Sue shook in fear. A strange hum filled the air, and the ghostly image of piles of eldritch machinery transposed itself against the laboratory. "Everyone OUT!" shouted Reed, knowing what was happening, if not how. Quickly, they raced out of the lab, and out of the phantom machines. The hum turned into a brief high-pitched squeal then the ghost machines turned all too real. "This is Victor's technology," Reed said, as he examined the wreckage. "I recognize the design philosophy behind it. He must have transported this here when the explosion occurred. He always was a spiteful sort." "How do we get to Latveria now?" Sue said. "The transport platform is buried somewhere in there, and you know that our planes will never be able to get across the borders." "Don't worry, dear," Reed said, "we'll figure out something. We will get Mary back, I assure you." Then, the sound of metal being moved about carefully came from deep within the wreckage. "Good lord," Jennifer said, her powerful hearing detecting the subtle sounds, "there's someone in there." She quickly tore into the machinery. Ben soon joined her, and they worked in unison to reach the buried person. Finally, they dug a huge tunnel, turned smooth by Johnny's carefully placed fire-blasts, to the trapped person. "Wow," Johnny said, as he stared with appreciation at who they had found. It was a girl, about sixteen with ash-blonde hair and deep blue eyes. She was dressed rather strangely, all swatches of fabrics put together randomly by a mad tailor. "Hi, my name's Johnny. What's yours?" She stared at him blankly for a moment, as she slowly walked down the tunnel, not saying a word. Then, she caught sight of Sue and Reed. "Mommy! Daddy!" she cried, as she ran towards them. Shocked, they did not stop her when she drew them into a huge hug. "Wha-" Sue said. Reed, however, had more presence of mind, if only slightly, so he said, "Ah." "Did she say 'Mommy'?" Johnny asked Ben. "It sounded like she did," Ben replied. "Think it's possible?" "Hey, I learned after turning into a livin', breathin' pile o' bricks, anything's possible, especially with this group," Ben said sagely. "Nuts," Johnny said, "I was really looking forward to having a date." CASTLE DOOM In the chaos after the explosion, the power to Nathaniel's restraints ebbed, just enough for him to make good his escape. A doorway of light appeared, and he fell through it. Instantly, a healing field hit him, numbing the pain slightly, as the Doc-In-A-Box went about its job. He activated a screen, and it showed the event occurring in the Baxter Building. He smiled. "It's all going according to plan," he said. "Naha. Nahaha. Nahahahaha. NAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA!! . . . Hack, oy my throat's dry." ELSEWHENWHEREWHYHOW In a place beyond description, beings of vast power stared at one another. "Well, that one went down like a lead balloon," said one, a figure in elaborate armor. "She was supposed to waylaid here during her Instrumentation. What now?" *{WE WAIT}* AUTHOR'S NOTE: FINALLY DONE WITH THE FIRST FREAKIN' BIT! Tell me what you think, where I should improve, where I'm perfect, etcetera etcetera. Next up for one of the five/six/seven people posting to XXY currently, and certainly the most, umm . . . not sure. -Murmur the Fallen "Darlin'!" yelled Jean Grey sent telekinetically directed electrons toward her darling. "Wagh! Jean!" screamed Scott in alarm, then he sprinted away from the girl he was hitting upon. "EEEYYYAAAAHHH!!!" he screamed, as he was hit with ten thousand volts of Phoenix Retribution. "Such is fate," Charlie said solemnly as he clapped his hands ritualistically. Urusei Mutants, coming to a illness addled mind near you! ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Track your stocks and funds in a StockMaster portfolio. With easy setup, you get quotes, charts, and news for them all on just one page. No limits, fast loading, and FREE! http://clickhere.egroups.com/click/238 eGroups.com home: http://www.egroups.com/group/xxy http://www.egroups.com - Simplifying group communications